It was a cold and foggy day.
I was splashing and splashing in the brown mud puddles. The rain trickled down my neck. I was shivering and cold.
Jaime C
It was a dark and cold day.
I shivered like a stormy monster.
The rain was trickling down my neck.
And mud was squishing into my gumboots.
I felt very cold.
Indi
It was a cloudy and stormy day. Mud dripped when I was splashing in the
puddles. I sploshed and splashed.
Xavier
It was a wet and flooding day. The rain was trickling down the window. I was playing in the mud puddles. It was a dark day.
Bjorn
One day I woke up.
The weather was bad. I got my
gumboots and I got my yellow rain coat.
My gumboots are squishy in the mud puddles.
Aaron
We have been using powerful words to make our writing more interesting!
Kia ora Pod 2, my name is Becks and I have been doing some work with your teachers about blogs, so I thought I should come and have a look at them! What awesome writing about playing in the rain! I think you have all used some really powerful verbs to make your writing interesting. Some of my favourite ones are - trickled, squishing and sploshed! I bet you all had fun playing the rain! Were you pretty dirty when you were finished?
ReplyDeleteYour mad fun is really funny I wish I was there hope you had a great time
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