'Home' writing

After reading the story 'Quaky Cat' we decided to copy one of the strategies that the writer used.
On the last page she repeats the phrase 'home is' to make the story interesing.
We are learning strategies to make our stories more interesting and we thought this would be a great one to try and copy.


What do you think of our efforts?

Home is a cuddle with your teddies.
Home is a cuddle with your pets on the couch watching t.v.
Home is a wrestle in the lounge.
Home is a kiss with your Mum.
Charlie

Home is a hug on the couch.
Home is a belly flop on my Dad.
Home is an RKO on my Dad.
Home is a cuddle with your cat.
Jayden

Home is a snuggly hot bed.
Home is a big, hot, cuddly cat.
Home is watching a movie with Mum and Dad.
Home is a cat who goes around your neck.
Home is a snuggly cat in your bed.
Max

Home is an excited dog with a wet, licky tongue.
Home is a cute little kitten that is really, really soft.
Home is a kitten who snuggles up in my bed.
Home is a hug with Mum and Dad.
Olivia

Home is a cuddle with my cat on the sofa.
Home is a bed that is comfy.
Home is a cuddle with Mum and Dad, too.
Niamh

Home is a snuggly, soft toy, turtle and a pokemon pikachu.
Home is a warm snuggly bed.
Home is a warm hug.
Home is a special place to play.
Jonathan

Home is a snuggly hug with your pet.
Home is a snuggle in your cosy bed.
Home is watching a movie with Mum and Dad.
Home is coming home and being glad.
Home is seeing your friends.
Skylar

Home is a snuggly warm bed.
Home is a snuggly, excited puppy.
Home is a cuddle with your friends.
Home is facing your fears.
Bridget

Home is a place to play operation.
Home is sleeping with my big bunny, Cuddles.
Home is a place to play with my dogs.
Home is playing with my great cousins.
Kaea