Wednesday, 23 August 2017

More descriptive writing!

This morning we had another go at writing descriptive sentences following the same formula as the post below.
Firstly, we walked around the edge of the field and in the bushes to see what we could write about. We saw lots of different trees, some cows (jerseys, herefords and freisians) grazing in the paddock beside the field and tunnels going through the bushes.

We think we did pretty well. 

Friendly cows mooing at Pod Two.
Keira

Grey and white jersey eating the grass.
Charlee

Stinky, green trail poking in my feet.
Friendly jersey resting on the grass.
Lucas

Dark, secret tunnel leading to the cows.
Sticky, frosty grass standing on the dirt.
Max

Black, glossy freisian looking at me.
Neave

Giant, friendly cows sniffing at us.
Olivia

Yellow, silky leaves sparkling in the sun.
Jessica

Soft, green kawakawa hiding in the bush.
Imogen

Friendly, baby jersey walking up to me.
Jayden

Wet, dark tunnel standing on the track.
Cooper

Glossy, hairy hereford poking out it's tongue.
Kaea


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